tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3727280084737825747.post6768780633683065964..comments2023-12-11T03:07:25.271-08:00Comments on സ്മൃതി: കഥകള് ഇംഗ്ലീഷില് - ENGLISH STORIESജെ പി വെട്ടിയാട്ടില്http://www.blogger.com/profile/01556802862945181536noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3727280084737825747.post-88590058309765064422011-05-13T23:18:13.469-07:002011-05-13T23:18:13.469-07:00hello chithal
thank u for your comments.
i have n...hello chithal<br /><br />thank u for your comments.<br />i have no concern with the gramatical issues. i am satisfied if d readers could follow the contents of story.<br /><br />regards with the timings of church gate etc.<br />this is just an imagination. and not true story.<br /><br />i have released the first part full in another blog of mine, d link is furnished here itself.<br /><br />kindly read d full story and <br />welcome your comments there too.<br /><br />wish you all d best<br /><br />jp vettiyattilജെ പി വെട്ടിയാട്ടില്https://www.blogger.com/profile/01556802862945181536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3727280084737825747.post-16049320045446919912011-05-10T23:50:04.688-07:002011-05-10T23:50:04.688-07:00please read d story here
http://jp-angaleyam.blogs...please read d story here<br />http://jp-angaleyam.blogspot.com/2011/05/pacheese-waala-gaadi.htmlജെ പി വെട്ടിയാട്ടില്https://www.blogger.com/profile/01556802862945181536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3727280084737825747.post-35258069007542845672011-05-03T21:22:19.339-07:002011-05-03T21:22:19.339-07:00The story line looks promising, though there could...The story line looks promising, though there could be glares from readers for using present tense esp towards end of the para.<br /><br />Another thing which is a purely personal opinion (don't want to question the freedom of the author) is "5 pm after work in churchgate daily" seems impractical in a city like Bombay!ചിതല്/chithalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10819275749986504528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3727280084737825747.post-65779617145865547702011-05-03T21:20:06.468-07:002011-05-03T21:20:06.468-07:00The story line looks promising, though a slight di...The story line looks promising, though a slight difference of opinion could arise from readers regarding the present tense usage than the past tense, esp towards end.<br /><br />One more thing I felt - and please treat it as a purely personal opinion; I have no rights to question the freedom of an author. Well the point of contention was "5 pm in the evenings after work at churchgate" seems a little impractical in a city like Bombay :)<br /><br />Do we say "some sprains" or "a sprain"?ചിതല്/chithalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10819275749986504528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3727280084737825747.post-41315038517875544722011-05-02T23:00:48.930-07:002011-05-02T23:00:48.930-07:00dear mash,
congratsdear mash,<br />congratsകുസുമം ആര് പുന്നപ്രhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11777823915419572028noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3727280084737825747.post-65523440403580187792011-05-02T22:34:53.212-07:002011-05-02T22:34:53.212-07:00Story in English [ ഒരു പരീക്ഷണം]
hey guys, come o...Story in English [ ഒരു പരീക്ഷണം]<br /><br />hey guys, come on... quick, our pacheeswala train is coming...<br /><br />"sethu was telling to others while running towards the train.<br /><br />"sethu, pls get me also a seat as i cant run like u" Sunitha said as she was much behind her friends.<br /><br />"yes suni, I shall try, dont bother, we will make u sit... " <br /><br />sethu, slightly turned back and told to Sunitha.ജെ പി വെട്ടിയാട്ടില്https://www.blogger.com/profile/01556802862945181536noreply@blogger.com